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User: Alexis
Problems.
This is what I thought should become a book sorry if you don't agree with it. If you have any thoughts about this book please comment on it and I will try my best to answer it.

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Chris-Jean

You have expressed so much emotion, Alexis in so few words. It is as though you write from the heart.

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J. M. Rivers

Nice cover, good message, I misread one line and laughed till tears came to my eyes.

Yeah, about the stanza or verse thing, it would be a great help. Also editing but I like!

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Alexis

Thank you for the feed back

J. M. Rivers

You're welcome.

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RevkenR

Still could use a bit of editing. You might also consider writing in verse format. That would make it easier to read.

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Alexis

Okay thank you for your advice

RevkenR

Still love the story! :o)

Alexis

Thank you

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Gelöschter User

let you you book hit my heart

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Alexis

I still have to update it more

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RevkenR

Very interesting. Although it does need a little editing. A few misspelled words.

Looking forward to the next update.

If you want I could help with the edit.

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RevkenR

You are right, it should become a book. It is poetry of the heart. I love it, and I am looking forward to more. :o)

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