liked your Tuffy story.
A few changes I could suggest.
Twice you say 'Miss Rabbit', and later you write it correctly...'Mrs. Rabbit'.
In one place you call Mr. Babbles a badger, then later you call hin=m an otter. Those are not same.
Also the sentence should be 'Is there something inside to get me?' was Tuffy's terrified thought to himself. His thoughts could be in quotation marks or italicized.
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I heard my guinea pig chirping like a bird... I research to find out why he was making the bird like sounds, some theories say it's because he's lonely, others say it's because he could be in pain but the one I believe, is my Big Boy is just happy. I like the happy theory so I'm gonna go with that. I can't wait to hear him chirping again!